once upon a time there was a women walking in the rain named tom bradey and was wearing a football suit and jersey after a long day of hard studying of college studies of classes so worth not wanting to fail in and always pass and as she was walking she saw a mamma,daddy,and a baby dear standing in a bunch of piles of very tall grass that made them blend in so she looked really closely and was amazed of the delightful sight seeing she did on a thursday afternoon say around 1pm and then she went home and her mom said there is a coach on the phone that wants you to play football for them and so she did and was a good football player the end
I love it! I love how you used train of thought to keep going. There are many writers such as e.e. cummings who used lowercase and long train of thought sentences to tell stories. Great job!
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