It's... cold in here.
Cold... A choice I understand.
I can stand...
But would I rather to sit?
Maybe... It's a decision I know too well of.
This or That...
One or Two...
Yes or No...
Can't I just be... cold...?
Can't I just... stand...?
Can't I just... understand...?
Can't I... decide...?
Why...?
Why can't I...?
Decide...
Decisions...
Choices...
Answers...
It's what I understand...
What I experience...
What I... decide...
Do you...?
Do you understand...?
Do you answer...?
Do you... choose...?
Do you feel... cold...?
That's really awesome! I love your writing style with the dashes and hesitations. It creates a drama while reading it. Great job! Thanks for sharing it!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! I take it all from just being a roleplayer, so I gain a bit of learning that I put into different types of writing.
DeleteI love it! It looks really good properly formatted! I love the bold emphasis at the end, too!
ReplyDeleteThank you lots Kaeden! I wanted to put the bold emphasis to make a statement to the beginning but also to the audience of the question that sticks out throughout the poem.
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